Place and Time Workshop

1. Clarissa Rios

A. I thought the overall writing was great. She did a really great job of giving a good mix of background information and dialogue. I love the story about the senior service, it was very personal and showed how important religion is to you. The only thing I would suggest is, add more information about the specific place she chose (the stage).

B. Edit the position of the Dialogue (add it to a new line and indent)

2. Rachel Surgent

A. I thought the paper was great. She did a really great job of making the reader feel like they were there by adding a large amount of detail and dialogue within her short story. I really loved the dialogue between her and the other cast members before there big show, it was really interesting. The only thing I would suggest is to add more background information within the dialogue.

B. I don't have anything specific, I thought the paper was written very well.